Year 3 Writing
‘Description of a Marsh in Winter’ As Annie sprinted against the beating wind, she came to the icy river and came to a halt. A few seconds later she spotted a ghostly figure ever so slightly hovering past the terrifying trees gleaming in the silvery moon’s light. The seagulls screamed like werewolves. The freezing snow licked Annie’s face, which then flopped onto the ground moments after she tripped on some rocks. She got soaked in the heavy hailstones. An Annie joyfully skipped through the marsh humming to herself she heard birds tweeting happily. The trees swayed in the gentle breeze. Max Gregory
‘Extract from a Spooky Story’ “I think you’ll do well with this new book” Dante said. Jim was sauntering back from school on the bright new track he always walked on with his friends Henry and Dante. “Bye” Charlie shouted as the five friends walked their separate ways on the track. Now he was on his own. Suddenly he saw a gap in the fence. Where was it leading to? Jim thought he should go because he was always curious. He slipped through the tiny gap in the fence and found himself on an old, muddy, broken concrete track leading to an old looking, broken-down house that led to an old building, which said ‘we keep up old buildings.com’. Soon he reached the end of the dirty track and reached the house that looked like it was going to fall on top of him. He stepped in the old house and screamed “AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAGH!” At that moment when he screamed, a transparent ghost with bugs on his hands just had simply walked right through one of the house’s walls. Daniil Kokhanskiy
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