Writing and Publishing Scientific Articles Course Workbook

Effective Figures and Tables

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Problems

A description of the scores is missing.

▪ The row for totals is unlabeled, and the total for each column is the same (repeated information).

▪ There are no units for the “protein” columns.

▪ The 2 columns of “Protein A” data are separated by a column of “Protein B” data.

▪ The numbers in parentheses are not defined.

The table has too many lines.

Table 23. Results of immunohistochemical analysis in 84 tumor specimens

Protein A

Protein B

Protein A

Protein C

Score

(membranous)

(cytoplasmic)

(nuclear)

(membranous)

84 (100)

84 (100)

84 (100)

84 (100)

0

24 (29)

35 (42)

65 (77)

70 (83)

1

25 (30)

34 (40)

10 (12)

10 (12)

2

35 (42)

15 (18)

9 (11)

4 (5)

Solutions

“Score” is defined in a footnote.

▪ The row of totals has been deleted because the title gives the total and the columns are short.

▪ A spanning column heading has been added to provide units.

▪ The “Protein A” columns are now side by side.

▪ The numbers in parentheses are defined in the spanning column heading.

▪ The vertical lines and unnecessary horizontal lines have been removed.

Table 23. Results of immunohistochemical analysis in 84 tumor specimens

No. tumors with positive staining (%)

Protein A (membranous)

Protein A (nuclear)

Protein B (cytoplasmic)

Protein C (membranous)

Score*

0

24 (29)

65 (77)

35 (42)

70 (83)

1

25 (30)

10 (12)

34 (40)

10 (12)

2

35 (42)

9 (11)

15 (18)

4 (5)

* 0, no staining; 1, moderate staining; 2, pronounced staining.

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