Cohesion and Clarity
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There has been a dramatic increase in the worldwide prevalence of obesity…. From this perspective, most weight gain represents a subtle imbalance in an otherwise tightly regulated hormonal system. Several hormones are now known to influence the appetite- control centers located in the hypothalamus…. (From List & Habener, 2003) 4. Effective scientific writing is clear, strong, and precise. For scientific writing to be most effective, the language must be clear, strong, and precise. Why are these characteristics so important? Readers must be able to understand an author’s meaning; misunderstandings can waste time and are potentially embarrassing. Writing that is clear is easier to understand and remember.
Tips for Clear, Strong, Precise Writing
Books on English writing style generally agree on certain techniques that lead to clear, strong, precise writing: ▪ Use words that are precise and strong rather than vague, general, or ambiguous. ▪ Use first-person voice rather than third-person voice. ▪ Use active verbs rather than passive verbs. ▪ Avoid vague introductory phrases and vague pronouns. ▪ Use a, an, and the appropriately. ▪ Introduce a term before using its acronym or abbreviation. Each of the techniques above is discussed in detail below. ( Note: In English, commas are commonly used to help clarify meaning within sentences. Details and examples on using commas correctly are included at the end of this chapter.)
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