Junior Alleynian 2016

YEAR 3 CREATIVEWRITING

The Thor’s Thunderer I was just walking along a nice beach in Antarctica when I saw a golden pebble glittering and shimmering in the morning sunlight. I bent down but before I could pick it up I felt a blast of heat and fell over! By the time I got up, it was gone. Quick as a flash, it was right there in front of me like it had never been away! I picked it up and instantly I was surrounded by lightning, streaking up into a green cloud. I recognised it from the ‘Incomplete Book of Dragons’ as a cloud made by a Thor’s Thunderer. Sure enough, the Thunderer swooped out of the cloud and grabbed the pebble from me. “YOU WILL NOT HANDLE DRAGON JEWEL!” said the Thunderer in Dragonese. “Is this really the Dragon Jewel?” I asked inquisitively. Without as much as a growl he scooped me up and placed me on his bare, scaly back. Firing clouds to block me from view, he took me all the way to his lair. On our way we passed a very nasty dragon who tried to take the jewel. When we finally arrived, we found an army of stealth dragons waiting for us! They started attacking as soon as they saw us, but the Thunderer eliminated them with a thrash of his tail, but another sent flares at the Dragon Jewel. The Thunderer moved the jewel out of the way and got him with a thunder cloud. The rest fleed and I lived happily every after, riding Thunderride (that’s what I called him) every day. Alasdair Mackintosh, 3N promised not to be mischievous and naughty. When David was sitting down for his lunch of sausages and mash, the island started shaking and David saw the volcano erupting and heard a booming voice in his head saying “the volcano erupting is a sign that a dragon has been born and you are the chosen one to destroy it. Jump into the sea and you will be able to breathe under water.” Then the voice disappeared and David stood open mouthed looking at the bright blue water. He flung himself at the water and held his breath. He knew he didn’t need to but he did and then he got out and felt a tingling feeling all over himself. The he heard a deafening roar and jumped suddenly backwards into the water. A cutlass flew into his hand at that same moment and he did a practice swing and accidentally it flew out of his hand and BANG, it hit the monster directly in the forehead and stayed there for a second. Then a piercing scream came from inside the dragon. David nearly went deaf and the dragon stumbled down. David was awarded a bravery award from the Prime Minister and a thousand bags of gold from the King. The family were soon wealthy and David’s name went down in history. And that is why we are celebrating St David’s day from this day on. Kiran Slatter, 3G

Long ago in a faraway land there was a teenage boy with the name of David. He lived in a small cottage on a big round island. In the distance you could see the faint outlines of a gigantic volcano. It hardly every erupted but to be safe David’s mum told him, when you are allowed to row a boat yourself never row it near the volcano. David always listened to what his mum said and never missed a word his mum told him. He was very adventurous and loved to explore. He had blonde hair and bright crystal eyes. He was the most intelligent boy on the island and was the only boy on the island. David didn’t go to school so his mum and dad gave him home schooling. David’s cottage was lovely on the outside and inside. It was painted white with ivy hanging on the walls. There was expensive furniture hanging from the stone walls inside. To get food for the family David’s dad had to sail to the main land and buy things from the supermarket. His mum and dad still went to work but worked on different days so they could still look after David on different days. The Ultimate Sea Quest

One day David’s mum and dad had to go to work together and couldn’t afford to buy a nanny. David was left alone and

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