POUI | CAVE HILL JOURNAL OF CREATIVE WRITING

Forbes was more astonished than any of them. With trembling hands he took the paper

plate and glanced wild-eyed to the grandmother and the mother and the boy, to the father and

to the people. What tremendous hatred had just a moment ago been focused on banishing him

from their community permanently, had now swayed to the other side and was gaining

momentum. What he thought he had meant for destruction became, unintentionally, the

platform for something good. It smelled like rain.

And then gradually, as if summoned out of a long, distant nap, an armada of clouds

moved over the park. They were big clouds, with muscle and texture and real thought, the kind

that meant truth — clouds that knew your secrets and still rumbled anywhere they wanted

following any and every succulent wish until it was the right time to make them real, those

perfect moments to drench the dreamers hard.

As the boy handed Forbes his bear and green tent, a thunderclap jolted the community.

While the others rocked back and forth, singing out into the greatly marled and dark and

imminent sky, Forbes buried into the tent all his fear, his hatred, his insecurity and loss, his

jealousy and maliciousness, his harsh words and the pain, the slow, agonizing torture of a man

who had lost his hope. Raindrops smacked the picnic table, lifted the powdery earth.

Forbes breathed in the fragrance of the rain. The strange freedom of the air in his body

made his spine tingle. It was as if a white cloud had descended upon him and drew out the

poison in his blood, the poison in his bones and in his skin and mind. His eyes became soft

again — like they had in the old years when the rain came every day. His tongue softened. His

jaw loosened and began to work through the old words, the generous words, the words of

kindness and beauty.

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